Very good for your first

As i said very good for animation, but you need to remember to stream sounds and not
loop them, also you need to remember to include other artists e.g. animation and in ur case music.

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Its ... ok but, umm it could have been a tiny little bit more tidy and detailed (backround, smaller brush, shading etc.) . Also you might want to look at some lip syncing tutorials but I do like the idea with the story and the voice isn't to bad.
Because this is your first one and im asuming you havn't done much on what your using i will give you a 3 .

Cool XD

It reminds my of my sister, umm anyway i really like it...

kno if its in use in any project.