Very good for your first
As i said very good for animation, but you need to remember to stream sounds and not
loop them, also you need to remember to include other artists e.g. animation and in ur case music.
Its ... ok but, umm it could have been a tiny little bit more tidy and detailed (backround, smaller brush, shading etc.) . Also you might want to look at some lip syncing tutorials but I do like the idea with the story and the voice isn't to bad.
Because this is your first one and im asuming you havn't done much on what your using i will give you a 3 .
This is a reality for sum ...
Good that sum isnt me
I like this XD
It's funny because her mom told her she couldn't go, after she bought tickets.
It reminds my of my sister, umm anyway i really like it...
kno if its in use in any project.
this is a masterpiece, till now only the gods could create such beautiful music
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